Monday, January 9, 2012

Feminism

I’m going to analyze “Things Fall Apart” from a feminist perspective. The theoretical text explains that when applying feminist criticisms to a p iece, we must consider certain questions, such as whether the author is male or female, the role of women in the text, and the attitudes held towards women by male characters, and I plan on applying these perspectives and more when examining the novel. The text states that the essence of feminist criticism is that “it is feared, it is problematic, and it has the transformative power to reshape our world.” This is indeed a strong theme in “Things Fall Apart,”-although it takes place figuratively: Christianity, which Okonkwo blames for the “warlike men of Umuofia, who had so unaccountably become soft like women” is symbolically a feminine force in the novel. The English missionaries who come are ruled by a Queen, Nwoye, who is regarded by Okonkwo as “effeminate,” is among the first to convert, and while Okonkwo believes that aggression and anger are masculine traits, the missionaries preach about “brothers who lived in darkness and in fear, ignorant of the love of God.” This new religion ends up  permanently transforming the village, and directs a shift of cultural tradition.
            The text also provides several quotes that are parallel to the attitudes towards women in “Things Fall Apart.” For example, Alexander Pope is cited as stating that “Most women have no character at all.” In the novel, the cultural word for a man who has taken no title, therefore having no “character” is an “agbala”-meaning a woman. In addition, Okonkwo frequently wishes that Ezinma was born a male, as she demonstrates traditionally masculine characteristics such as temper tantrums and is bold and confident in nature. Accordingly, the text states that “consciously or unconsciously, women and men conform to the societal constructs established by society. Boys, for example, should be aggressive, self-assertive, and domineering, but girls should be passive, meek, and humble.” Although Ezinma displays the masculine societal constructs, she unconsciously falls into that of the typical woman in Umuofia, eventually getting married and presumably becomes destined to repeat the life of her mother.
            Due to what the text calls “sexual politics,” branded by what Kate Millet maintains is centered around “male dominance,” Ezinma is unable to attain a high position in society due to her gender. Ironically, Nwoye’s laziness and uncertain personality is precisely the opposite of Ezinma, and greatly troubles Okonkwo, who states “I will not have a son who cannot hold his head in the gathering of the clan.” Although Ezinma has the potential that Nwoye lacks to p articipate in leadership and gatherings, it is not even a matter to consider in Umoufia, and Okonkwo is simply left with the nagging, persistent wish that Ezinma would have been born male. Virginia Wolfe analyzes this phenomenon in societies, in which she “hypothesizes the existence of Shakespeare’s sister, one who was equally as gifted a writer as Shakespeare himself.” She claims that “because she is a woman, she cannot obtain an education or find profitable employment…such a loss of artistic talent and personal worth is the result of society’s opinion of women: they are seen as intellectually inferior to men.” As a result, Ezinma’s potential for leadership and participation in clan affairs is overshadowed by Nwoye’s unconventional and disappointing “laziness” for a male.

Monday, October 3, 2011

technocracy stuff



In Niel Postman’s “Technopoly,” he describes the transition into a technopoly society from one that was previously a technocracy. He describes a technopoly as a “totalitarian technocracy.” Efficiency is valued over human identity, and far lengths are stretched to maximize scientific as well as technological progress. Meanwhile, he describes the citizens of technocracy as aware that “science and technology did not provide philosophies by which to live. As a result, a technocracy is depicted as a society merely driven and “concerned to invent machinery.”
            Aldous Huxley’s novel, “Brave New World,” fully illustrates the concept of a future technocracy. Science no longer revolves around humans for discovery; humans revolve around science instead. As Postman explains, a technocracy includes the “beliefs that the primary goal of human labor and thought is efficiency, that technical calculation is in all respects superior to human judgment” This is seen in “Brave New World” where the smallest amounts of pinpoint precision and measurements produce the largest effects in society. For example, when the D.H.C is explaining the process of incubating future humans, he states that the gametes “have to be kept at thirty-five instead of thirty seven [degrees].” This demonstrates the extent to which calculations play a huge role in a technocracy society.
            The domination of machinery further characterizes the technocracy. Work is no longer an individualized process in which each employee constructs their product by hand, but an impersonal one in which a machine routinely manufactures an item with the assistance of a worker. In addition, such workers are merely considered as another face in a vast sea of many. As Postman explains, “although technocracy found no clear space for the human soul, its citizens held to the belief that no increase in material wealth would compensate them for a culture that insulted their self-respect.”
            Postman further concludes his chapter by reflecting that “Americans were better prepared to undertake the creation of a Technopoly than anyone else. But its full flowering depended on still another set of conditions…the context in which the American distrust of constraints, the exploitative genius of its captains of industry, the success of technology, and the devaluation of traditional beliefs took on the exaggerated significance that pushed technocracy in America over into Technopoly.” These criteria all fit in the society that Huxley wields in “Brave New World,” therefore further illustrating its totalitarian society.  

Sunday, September 25, 2011

technology

As the world progresses towards the advancement of society, technology has gained a more complex intelligence with every step. In his article, “2045: The Year Man Becomes Immortal,” Lev Grossman points out that one day computers “could be put in the service of emulating whatever it is our brains are doing when they create consciousness.” If technology ever accelerates to this point, humans can be in danger of their individuality. Computers able to decode something as uniquely human as the thought process and consciousness ultimately degrade the authenticity of being human.
Being authentically human is what sets our species apart from animals as well as machines. Humans are able to appreciate and derive pleasure from fine art forms, such as music, painting, and poetry. In regards to the computer built by a 17 year old that composes music, Grossman states that “to see creativity, the exclusive domain of humans, usurped by a computer built by a 17 year old is to watch a line blur that cannot be unblurred, the line between organic intelligence and artificial intelligence.” Technology, in this case, has robbed humans of their essential humanity. Real music is often inspired by the individual’s emotions and creativity, rather than a multitude of mathematically configured notes derived from a computer system.
 In addition, today, humans are valued more than simply just “workers.” Each person has an individual appearance, personality, emotions, and mindset which adds a variety of different elements to each workplace. Technology has already threatened the human workplace through automation, in which machines that are far more efficient than human labor have caused unemployment. Aldous Huxley’s novel, “Brave New World,” has also demonstrated the lack of human expression in the workplace. Each worker is specifically engineered to perform the job they are designed to do, and these workers are created by identical masses. When Bernard, one of the main characters, flies over the ocean, he notes that “it makes me feel as though…as though I were more of me…more on my own, not so completely a part of something else. Not just a cell in the social body (Huxley 90).” It is evident that he strives for social individuality, rather than being “enslaved by my conditioning (Huxley 91).”
Grossman states that the “Biological boundaries that most people think of as permanent and inevitable Singularitarians see as merely intractable but solvable problems. Death is one of them. Old age is an illness like any other, and what do you do with illnesses? You cure them.” Death and illness is an essential component of the circle of life, and to manipulate its occurrence would be considered unnatural. Technology’s posed control over biological processes in the future further degrades one of the components of human life. In regard to biological manipulation, Bernard even asks Lenina “wouldn’t you like to be free to be happy in some other way…In your own way, for example; not in everybody elses way.” Technology in the novel is exaggerated to the point in which it predestines our mindset and functioning in the workplace, ultimately endangering us of losing “our essential humanity.”

Monday, September 5, 2011

rhetorical analysis

LINK: http://www.studentpulse.com/articles/405/1/cest-moi-gustave-flauberts-madame-bovary
In her article “C’est Moi: Gustave Flaubert’s ‘Madame Bovary,” Rebecca A. Demarest uses a variety of rhetorical techniques in order to analyze Gustave Flaubert’s “Madame Bovary.” The structural methods employed by Demarest to convey her argument throughout her article consists of numerous short paragraphs, characterized by an alternating pattern of commentary in its entirety or context drawn from the novel. This is seemingly unconventional in comparison with the writing techniques advised in the average rudimentary English class. However, Demarest’s avant-garde rhetorical approach towards her article permits her attitude towards Flaubert’s work to be efficiently conveyed.  
Demarest immediately opens her article with a brief account of “Madame Bovary’s” material, describing it as “an intricate and compelling tale of a young woman caught in the throes of romanticism, a tale full of rich imagery and authorial allusions to Flaubert’s own life.” In most cases, this would be considered taboo in a Freshman English class, in which the student is expected to introduce their essay with a “hook” that will supposedly capture the reader’s interest immediately. After a commonly “cheesy” opening, the student is required to elaborate on their saccharine introduction, then follow it with the brief account of the novel/piece of work, as well as stating the title and author’s name. Such a technique should not be practiced by a uniform mass of students, as these “hooks” can make or break an essay. In the latter case, they may instantly create an aura of mediocrity to the work, and can often seem too cliché.
Demarest also includes quotes that serve as supporting context from the novel in her first paragraph, which according to the “Jane Shaffer Format” should be reserved for the body paragraphs. However, even in her body paragraphs, Demarest does not adhere to this format. The standard body paragraph, as we have been taught, should contain a topic sentence, a concrete detail (such as a quote from the text), followed by several sentences of commentary; this should make up the full 8 sentences required for the body paragraph. However, if everyone followed this format, it would subdue the uniqueness and creativity of one’s ideas. For example, it may become impossible to express a brilliant thought in such a rigid format and this in turn may result in the writer assembling an unsatisfactory sentence to satisfy the mandated structure of their essay. The resulting grammatical or structural imperfection ultimately detracts from the true quality of the sentence-and the writer’s method of expression. In addition, Demarest includes a quote from “the critic Bernard Paris, [who] says ‘Flaubert is deluding himself about his personality being absent’ (Paris 7).” Literary criticism is an especially crucial component to include in an essay, as it can considerably strengthen the writer’s argument, while also adding credulity. However, if one was to follow the commonly imposed Jane Shaffer format, where would they fit such literary criticism? It would be very difficult, as the “concrete details” need to be just that- “concretely” from the text in which the writer is discussing. Therefore, the quality of the essay would not be able to reach its full potential.
            Demarest’s essay demonstrates that unconventional structures and use of rhetoric can be far more efficient in conveying your argument. By refusing to adhere to a uniform format, Demarest is given the freedom to convey her points much more clearly and her arguments are strongly supported.